Edad: 23 años
Lugar de Nacimiento: Ciudad de Babilonia
Estatura: 1.68 m
Peso: 57 kg
Poderes: algunos otorgados por Mephisto
Ocupación: Mesera/Esclava de Mephisto
Color de ojos: Azul
Color de cabello: Lila
Personalidad: Ella es una persona amable, atenta, débil y torpe. Después se vuelve una persona sarcástica, lujuriosa, violenta y fría.
Perfil de Mephisto: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Perfil de Astartea: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Perfil de Kyrios: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
*I have been developing my story, so some things have changed in the characters, so I decided to just leave this little profile. I'll have time to submit more stuff.*
Age: 23 years old
Place of Birth: Babylon City
Height: 5,51 ft
Weight: 125,66 lb
Weapons: Gun / Sword
Powers: some granted by Mephisto
Occupation: Waitress / Mephisto's slave
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Lilac
Personality: She is a kind, caring, weak and clumsy girl. After, she becomes sarcastic, lustful, violent and cold.
Mephisto's Profile: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Astartea's Profile: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Wow....this is quite the character. Truly amazing. For her body resembles a woman quite well and she looks great either way. Also like how you drew them just alike even though they are both wearing different clothes. Must have took a lot of work.....maybe. And the sword she holds looks great, not too shiny and not to dark. Speaking of shine, the shine on her is pretty unique. Her hair and clothes both shine in different places and is very eye catching.
For her story is....pretty normal. I like how you made her story to be a regular story and then comes the sad part, which makes the character who they are today. =w= Its very good, but it seems you may have missed something. Shouldn't "have" be "has"? o3o I still say its a good story as....the mysterious man is reaalll mystery. You did a great job on this, without a doubt! ^^
And yes, you're right about her story, it's almost like a cliché, well, but for this story I based on several songs. I hope to finish soon other characters to start with my manga.
And thanks for your comment, I find it very helpful!
Ohhh your own manga and this is one of the characters? Sounds quuite interesting :3
Your most welcome, glad you found it helpful :3