Todo cambió un día que iba camino al trabajo y olvidó sus llaves. Al regresar a casa, la puerta estaba abierta, escuchó balazos y gritos. Al entrar estaba su madre y sus pequeños hermanos muertos, asesinados por 3 despiadados hombres. Al verlos salió corriendo de su casa a pedir ayuda. Los hombres fueron atrapados y enviados a prisión, pero debido a la corrupción salieron libres después de tres meses. Su padre fue asesinado en otro lugar después del accidente. Ahora reside en un departamento alquilado, trabaja como mesera y por si fuera poco, tiene cáncer, pero todo cambia cuando un misterioso hombre aparece en el restaurant y le propone un trato.
Edad: 23 años
Lugar de Nacimiento: Ciudad de Babilonia
Estatura: 1.68 m
Peso: 57 kg
Poderes: algunos otorgados por Mephisto
Ocupación: Mesera/Esclava de Mephisto
Vestimenta: Como demonio: Chaleco gris/ Sostén y pantalón de cuero/ Botas con cinturones de cuero. Como humano: camisa de manga larga / chaleco / falda / mallas / zapatos / diadema
Color de ojos: Azul
Color de cabello: Lila
Personalidad: Ella es una persona amable, atenta, débil y torpe. Después se vuelve una persona sarcástica, lujuriosa, violenta y fría.
Perfil de Mephisto: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Perfil de Astartea: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Perfil de Kyrios: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Glenna Dankworth, born in a common city. She had a normal life. She lived with her parents and her little brothers.
Everything changed one day when she went to work and forgot her keys. Upon returning home, the door was open, she heard gunshots and screams. When she came in, she saw her mother and little brothers dead, killed by three ruthless men. When she saw them she ran from her house to call for help. The men were caught and sent to prison, but because of corruption were released after three months. Her father was killed somewhere else after the accident. Now she's living in a rented apartment, works as a waitress and she has cancer, but everything changes when a mysterious man appears in the restaurant and offers her a deal.
Age: 23 years old
Race: Human / Demon
Place of Birth: Babylon City
Height: 5,51 ft
Weight: 125,66 lb
Weapons: Gun / Sword
Powers: some granted by Mephisto (fire, strength, disappear)
Occupation: Waitress / Mephisto's slave
Costume: As a Demon: gray Vest / leather bra and pants / leather boots with belts. As a human: long-sleeved shirt / vest / skirt / tights / shoes / hair band
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Lilac
Personality: She is a kind, caring, weak and clumsy girl. After, she becomes sarcastic, lustful, violent and cold.
Mephisto's Profile: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Astartea's Profile: marce-mustaine.deviantart.com/…
Wow....this is quite the character. Truly amazing. For her body resembles a woman quite well and she looks great either way. Also like how you drew them just alike even though they are both wearing different clothes. Must have took a lot of work.....maybe. And the sword she holds looks great, not too shiny and not to dark. Speaking of shine, the shine on her is pretty unique. Her hair and clothes both shine in different places and is very eye catching.
For her story is....pretty normal. I like how you made her story to be a regular story and then comes the sad part, which makes the character who they are today. =w= Its very good, but it seems you may have missed something. Shouldn't "have" be "has"? o3o I still say its a good story as....the mysterious man is reaalll mystery. You did a great job on this, without a doubt! ^^
And yes, you're right about her story, it's almost like a cliché, well, but for this story I based on several songs. I hope to finish soon other characters to start with my manga.
And thanks for your comment, I find it very helpful!
Ohhh your own manga and this is one of the characters? Sounds quuite interesting :3
Your most welcome, glad you found it helpful :3